Friday, 14 December 2018

My dreams-by Deva

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a poem about my dreams.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can use lots of adjectives in my poem.

I dream about...                                   I dream about...

Night and stars,                                 Skeletons and thunder,
nature and water,                               blood and monsters,
sunshine and shadows,                      clowns and darkness,
bees and flowers,                               demons and beasts,
and I am happy!                                 and I am scared!!

Wednesday, 22 August 2018

All about me-by Deva

Learning Intention-We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.

Hello! My name is Deva. I grew up in Panmure,Auckland. I was born on May. I like cooking with my mum. I like eating nachos and pies. I have 1 brother.

My favourite sports are gymnastics  and badminton.  I love to watch Matilda and the Greatest showman. I love reading Geronimo Stilton and owl diary. I like playing roblox. My friends are beautiful and nice. My favourite colours are purple and rose gold because they are beautiful colour.

Wednesday, 8 August 2018

Izzy the Panda-by Deva

Learning intention:We are learning to  write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stops correctly.
                             Izzy the mean Panda

Once upon a time there was a  panda name Izzy. She was mean and scary . She thought she was the coolest panda. 

One day a giant panda came who was much bigger than Izzy. Izzy was scared and she ran until she got lost.
While Izzy was running she found a new home which was better. There were lots of bamboos and water. She decided to stay there. She met some other pandas and made friends with them.

One day she found some kind of berry and thought it will be yum. But when she ate them she started to have a tummy ache. The next day the tummy ache got worse and worse. She thought of what she could do.

 She told her friends about the tummy ache. Her friends found a vet. The nurse  took her to a room. They told Izzy she would die because of her intestines was about to blow up. She closed her eyes and died.