Thursday, 29 March 2018

DEVA- by Deva

L-I-W.A.L.T-Write a poem .
S-C-I know I am successful when I can write a poem about myself using adjectives.

Skinny, brown eyes, short,
Black wavey hair,talks alot,

Sibling of  Shivay,
Likes pie,and chocolate,

Hate falling off my bike,
Enjoy  reading, riding my bike
Scared of bees,

Residense of Kapuni Road.
Who wants to be a vet.

Maduri My grandma

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T-Write a poem .
Success Criteria: I know I am Successful when I can write a poem about my grandma using adjectives.


Long hair, fair skin, light brown eyes, 
Short wavey  hair, always tired,

Sibling of Kishore,
Likes oranges, hate flies,
Enjoys watching t.v, and flowers, 

Scared of ghosts, and wasps,
Residense of Kapuni Road.

Thursday, 21 September 2017

Watching television does not make us clever -by Deva

Learning Intention W.A.L-how to write persuasive writing.
Success Criteria: I  know I am successful when I can persuade my reader to agree with my arguement.

I think we should not watch television whenever  we wanted to.

I think we should not watch television whenever we wanted to because, kids can have bad eye sight as well for parents. Children should not watch television because some programs has bad words and fighting. Some children watch too much T.V and forget to do their home work. Sometimes kids watch scary movies and get nightmares.

But, sometimes I think television help us learn some things. 

We should watch television sometimes, because some teaches us how to make arts and crafts and how to make things. It tells us about what will be the weather for the day. I think we should watch television sometimes because it helps us to relax.