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Friday, 2 August 2019

Deva- by Deva (autobiography)

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-Write my auto biography.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write my own autobiography using adjectives and paragraphs.
                             
                                 Deva    
My name is Deva. I am 10 years old. May 2009 is my birthday. My beautiful mum is Poonam and my handsome dad is Anish.  My caring and smart brother is Shivay. Sonam, Binu, Tina are my beatiful,kind,and respectful aunt's. Prav, Devon, Ameet are my handsome, caring smart and fast uncles.  

Maduri is my gorgeous grandma Prahlad is my handsome grandpa.

My favourite book is too much poo the lion and the king and Geronimo stilton.I like gymnastics and futsal because you keep learning the moves.  I do not have a favourite music I dont hear much music . the subjects I like is reading, writing, and spelling.

Again I do not have a favourite t.v. program. My favourite food is nachos, and pizza. My pretty friends are Aleenah, Brielle, and Asinate.    


What is a good friend? by Deva

Learning Intention: We are learning to write an explanation.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a  explanation using capital letters and full stop.


A good friend is who protects you wherever you go. Friends are who are very kind and who keeps secrets. Some friends are big gossipers and that causes fights. A friend stands up for others. For example someone pushes your friend and stand up for them by saying your eye statements. Some people have bad friends because they use them.


 In the movie Izrail Estarose and sunasi were playing hide and seek. Izrail was curios so he peeked sunasi wasn't happy so he pushed Izrail. Estarose said say your eye statements they became friends again. 

Fruit cup-by Deva

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T- Write an instruction.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write the instructions using first,second,third,then,next,lastly and finally.

Ingredients: Lettuce, pineapple, apple, kiwi fruit,and cream.

Steps: First wash your hands.Then wash your fruits. Peel the skin of your kiwi fruit. Next cut your fruits into bite sizes. then cover it with cream.And mix it. Lastly, wash your lettuce and shape it like a cup.When you're done, fill it with fruits. And You're done!

How to make a lettuce spring roll-by Deva

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T- Write an instruction.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write an instruction using first, second, third, then, next, lastly, and finally.

Ingredients: Lettuce, mince, boiled egg.

Steps:
First Wash your hands.
Second Wash your lettuce leaf by leaf.
Third Cook your mince.
Then peel the shell of your egg.
Lastly put your ingredients in your lettuce.
Most importantly eat it.

Sleeping beauty in st. Patrick school-by Deva

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-Write a narrative.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can write an invitation.


Dear sleeping beauty:
Your invited to our Christmas carol party. The address is st. Patrick school 5 church cresent 12 December the time is 3:30. Hope your coming. By Deva.

Today she came. I was exited and she was to. We went inside the class room. I said today we are having singing practice. My class mates are lining up outside. "yay" said sleeping beauty I love singing carols. Oh well lets go!

Since we practised and you enjoyed, lets go to the Christmas parade tomorrow. There will be yummy candy awards and Christmas performances. Sleeping beauty enjoyed this parade, but sadly   she had to leave I said good bye.


Friday, 14 December 2018

My dreams-by Deva

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a poem about my dreams.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can use lots of adjectives in my poem.


I dream about...                                   I dream about...

Night and stars,                                 Skeletons and thunder,
nature and water,                               blood and Zombies,
sunshine and shadows,                      clowns and darkness,
bees and flowers,                               demons and beasts,
and I am happy!                                 and I am scared!!