Sleeping beauty in st. Patrick school-by Deva

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-Write a narrative.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can write an invitation.


Dear sleeping beauty:
Your invited to our Christmas carol party. The address is st. Patrick school 5 church cresent 12 December the time is 3:30. Hope your coming. By Deva.

Today she came. I was exited and she was to. We went inside the class room. I said today we are having singing practice. My class mates are lining up outside. "yay" said sleeping beauty I love singing carols. Oh well lets go!

Since we practised and you enjoyed, lets go to the Christmas parade tomorrow. There will be yummy candy awards and Christmas performances. Sleeping beauty enjoyed this parade, but sadly   she had to leave I said good bye.

My dreams-by Deva

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a poem about my dreams.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can use lots of adjectives in my poem.

I dream about...                                   I dream about...

Night and stars,                                 Skeletons and thunder,
nature and water,                               blood and Zombies,
sunshine and shadows,                      clowns and darkness,
bees and flowers,                               demons and beasts,
and I am happy!                                 and I am scared!!

DEVA- by Deva

L-I-W.A.L.T-Write a poem .
S-C-I know I am successful when I can write a poem about myself using adjectives.

Skinny, brown eyes, short,
Black wavey hair,talks alot,

Sibling of  Shivay,
Likes pie,and chocolate,

Hate falling off my bike,
Enjoy  reading, riding my bike
Scared of bees,

Residense of Kapuni Road.
Who wants to be a vet.

Maduri My grandma

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T-Write a poem .

Success Criteria: I know I am Successful when I can write a poem about my grandma using adjectives.

                                  Maduri

Long hair, fair skin, light brown eyes, 
Short wavey  hair, always tired,

Sibling of Kishore,
Likes oranges, hate flies,
Enjoys watching t.v, and flowers, 

Scared of ghosts, and wasps,
Residense of Kapuni Road.

Should we cut down trees-by Deva

Learning Intention We are learning how to write persuasive writing.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can persuade somebody with my writing 

I think we should cut down trees

People should cut down trees so we can build houses out of the wood.  I think people should cut  down little pieces of wood to make pencils. We cut down trees to make furniture.

People can make chairs out of wood. I think people should cut down trees to make ladders. People cut down trees to make wooden doors.

We can make fences out of wood. People can make wooden rulers.We cut down trees to make wooden floor so people can walk on it.


So I think we should cut down trees. When someone cuts down a tree you could plant another tree in it's place.


  

Mother’s Day

On Mother’s Day my brother and I surprised my mum when my mum was sleeping, by waking her up.  She yawned and stretched.  Then my brother and I hugged our mum and we gave her a present.  I gave a cake to my mum.  The cake was made of butter and chocolate.  My mum hugged me and gave me lots of kisses.  My mum had a happy Mother’s Day.