Learning Intention-We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.
Hello! My name is Deva. I grew up in Panmure,Auckland. I was born on May. I like cooking with my mum. I like eating nachos and pies. I have 1 brother.
My favourite sports are gymnastics and badminton. I love to watch Matilda and the Greatest showman. I love reading Geronimo Stilton and owl diary. I like playing roblox. My friends are beautiful and nice. My favourite colours are purple and rose gold because they are beautiful colour.
Wednesday 22 August 2018
Wednesday 8 August 2018
Izzy the Panda-by Deva
Learning intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Izzy the mean Panda
Once upon a time there was a panda name Izzy. She was mean and scary . She thought she was the coolest panda.
One day a giant panda came who was much bigger than Izzy. Izzy was scared and she ran until she got lost.
While Izzy was running she found a new home which was better. There were lots of bamboos and water. She decided to stay there. She met some other pandas and made friends with them.
One day she found some kind of berry and thought it will be yum. But when she ate them she started to have a tummy ache. The next day the tummy ache got worse and worse. She thought of what she could do.
She told her friends about the tummy ache. Her friends found a vet. The nurse took her to a room. They told Izzy she would die because of her intestines was about to blow up. She closed her eyes and died.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Izzy the mean Panda
Once upon a time there was a panda name Izzy. She was mean and scary . She thought she was the coolest panda.
One day a giant panda came who was much bigger than Izzy. Izzy was scared and she ran until she got lost.
While Izzy was running she found a new home which was better. There were lots of bamboos and water. She decided to stay there. She met some other pandas and made friends with them.
One day she found some kind of berry and thought it will be yum. But when she ate them she started to have a tummy ache. The next day the tummy ache got worse and worse. She thought of what she could do.
She told her friends about the tummy ache. Her friends found a vet. The nurse took her to a room. They told Izzy she would die because of her intestines was about to blow up. She closed her eyes and died.
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