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Wednesday 8 August 2018

Izzy the Panda-by Deva

Learning intention:We are learning to  write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stops correctly.
                             Izzy the mean Panda

Once upon a time there was a  panda name Izzy. She was mean and scary . She thought she was the coolest panda. 

One day a giant panda came who was much bigger than Izzy. Izzy was scared and she ran until she got lost.
While Izzy was running she found a new home which was better. There were lots of bamboos and water. She decided to stay there. She met some other pandas and made friends with them.

One day she found some kind of berry and thought it will be yum. But when she ate them she started to have a tummy ache. The next day the tummy ache got worse and worse. She thought of what she could do.

 She told her friends about the tummy ache. Her friends found a vet. The nurse  took her to a room. They told Izzy she would die because of her intestines was about to blow up. She closed her eyes and died.


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