Learning Intention:W.A.L.T- Write an instruction.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write an instruction using first, second, third, then, next, lastly, and finally.
Ingredients: Lettuce, mince, boiled egg.
Steps:
First Wash your hands.
Second Wash your lettuce leaf by leaf.
Third Cook your mince.
Then peel the shell of your egg.
Lastly put your ingredients in your lettuce.
Most importantly eat it.
I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Friday, 2 August 2019
Sleeping beauty in st. Patrick school-by Deva
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-Write a narrative.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can write an invitation.
Dear sleeping beauty:
Your invited to our Christmas carol party. The address is st. Patrick school 5 church cresent 12 December the time is 3:30. Hope your coming. By Deva.
Today she came. I was exited and she was to. We went inside the class room. I said today we are having singing practice. My class mates are lining up outside. "yay" said sleeping beauty I love singing carols. Oh well lets go!
Since we practised and you enjoyed, lets go to the Christmas parade tomorrow. There will be yummy candy awards and Christmas performances. Sleeping beauty enjoyed this parade, but sadly she had to leave I said good bye.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can write an invitation.
Dear sleeping beauty:
Your invited to our Christmas carol party. The address is st. Patrick school 5 church cresent 12 December the time is 3:30. Hope your coming. By Deva.
Today she came. I was exited and she was to. We went inside the class room. I said today we are having singing practice. My class mates are lining up outside. "yay" said sleeping beauty I love singing carols. Oh well lets go!
Since we practised and you enjoyed, lets go to the Christmas parade tomorrow. There will be yummy candy awards and Christmas performances. Sleeping beauty enjoyed this parade, but sadly she had to leave I said good bye.
Labels:
sleeping beauty,
Writing
Friday, 10 May 2019
Friday, 14 December 2018
My dreams-by Deva
Learning Intention:We are learning to write a poem about my dreams.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can use lots of adjectives in my poem.
I dream about... I dream about...
Night and stars, Skeletons and thunder,
nature and water, blood and Zombies,
sunshine and shadows, clowns and darkness,
bees and flowers, demons and beasts,
and I am happy! and I am scared!!


Success Criteria:I am successful when I can use lots of adjectives in my poem.
I dream about... I dream about...
Night and stars, Skeletons and thunder,
nature and water, blood and Zombies,
sunshine and shadows, clowns and darkness,
bees and flowers, demons and beasts,
and I am happy! and I am scared!!


Thursday, 22 November 2018
Wednesday, 22 August 2018
All about me-by Deva
Learning Intention-We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.
Hello! My name is Deva. I grew up in Panmure,Auckland. I was born on May. I like cooking with my mum. I like eating nachos and pies. I have 1 brother.
My favourite sports are gymnastics and badminton. I love to watch Matilda and the Greatest showman. I love reading Geronimo Stilton and owl diary. I like playing roblox. My friends are beautiful and nice. My favourite colours are purple and rose gold because they are beautiful colour.
Success Criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.
Hello! My name is Deva. I grew up in Panmure,Auckland. I was born on May. I like cooking with my mum. I like eating nachos and pies. I have 1 brother.
My favourite sports are gymnastics and badminton. I love to watch Matilda and the Greatest showman. I love reading Geronimo Stilton and owl diary. I like playing roblox. My friends are beautiful and nice. My favourite colours are purple and rose gold because they are beautiful colour.
Labels:
All About Me,
recount
Wednesday, 8 August 2018
Izzy the Panda-by Deva
Learning intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Izzy the mean Panda
Once upon a time there was a panda name Izzy. She was mean and scary . She thought she was the coolest panda.
One day a giant panda came who was much bigger than Izzy. Izzy was scared and she ran until she got lost.
While Izzy was running she found a new home which was better. There were lots of bamboos and water. She decided to stay there. She met some other pandas and made friends with them.
One day she found some kind of berry and thought it will be yum. But when she ate them she started to have a tummy ache. The next day the tummy ache got worse and worse. She thought of what she could do.
She told her friends about the tummy ache. Her friends found a vet. The nurse took her to a room. They told Izzy she would die because of her intestines was about to blow up. She closed her eyes and died.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Izzy the mean Panda
Once upon a time there was a panda name Izzy. She was mean and scary . She thought she was the coolest panda.
One day a giant panda came who was much bigger than Izzy. Izzy was scared and she ran until she got lost.
While Izzy was running she found a new home which was better. There were lots of bamboos and water. She decided to stay there. She met some other pandas and made friends with them.
One day she found some kind of berry and thought it will be yum. But when she ate them she started to have a tummy ache. The next day the tummy ache got worse and worse. She thought of what she could do.
She told her friends about the tummy ache. Her friends found a vet. The nurse took her to a room. They told Izzy she would die because of her intestines was about to blow up. She closed her eyes and died.
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